My thoughts on your character from our interactions. First, your roleplay was solid and consistant (something I try to express to others is consitancy). You seemed to sorta know what you want, and had a plan to go about it.

However, what I also got from you is that you were RP-centered. Meaning, you strove that everything you did was about you. You didn't really encompass anyone elses RP and play off of it well. It all came back to you. This has the tendacy to drive others off. Interactions should not be about one individual, but instead be about the gathering and each person should act within that setting. I just never felt like you were trying to add your own RP to someone elses. Just seemed very much about your character.

This probably led to your downfall. You wanted Immeraction from all that I gathered. You seemed to press that, instead of letting the Immortals come to you. They key is to be interesting, and let them do their thing. Keep them interested, and you find yourself with a lot more Immeractions.

I thought your character was a fairly good character. However, it almost seemed as you were unadaptive, unwilling to make changes and grow. OOC, I never felt like you really wanted to be saved, that you knew you wanted to be evil. This more likely is why you sought Cyridia.

I think your character could have worked. Your play time sucks for what you sought to do, so that is always a killer. You just need to be very patient for this sort of thing. And even when things look down, trudge through them, keep RPing your tail off, and make the best of everything. Give people a reason to interact with you. Give them desire to do so. Make them feel like their charcter is important to you.

Great RPing comes from people bouncing off of one another. I hope this helps, and I hope you don't feel like I'm coming down on you. I think you are a good RPer, but there are somethings you can still learn and once you do, you could easily be an elite RPer.