I happen to agree with Java on this one point (bullet #2 being written oddly). But I also think I see where marketing team is going with this line. And not to nitpick, but this line is a tad confusing as written.

Change:

An aging system for all races and classes. Want to die a slow, agonizing death by boredom? Carrion Fields forces you to live every moment to the fullest!

to:

An aging system for all races and classes. Want to die a slow, agonizing death by boredom? No? Carrion Fields challenges you to live every moment to the fullest!

I've read over that line again and again and it sounds really like we're partly proud of advertising a boring game. (Which we all know is not the case).