FIRST DESC
desc + The first thing you notice is the intricate web that swings quietly about
desc + his head. Made up of extremely fine and intricatly made, but unpolished,
desc + steel chains that go from ear to nose, nose to lip, tooth to ear,
desc + tooth to eyebrow, in all sorts of combinations attached to small
desc + iron loop piercings all over his face. Each chain seems to be carefully
desc + fitted with a tiny leather sleeve where it crosses another chain, so
desc + as to make this constantly shifting mesh of metal eerily silent.
desc + Other than his face, the rest of his body is rather unremarkable, accept
desc + maybe for the fact that it is remarkably unremarkable. He is fit, as
desc + any fighter might be, he is quiet and has sharp claws, as many other of
desc + felar race...infact, he looks pretty much like any other felar you have
desc + ever seen...apart from the chain mesh over his face.

DESCRIPTION AFTER GAINING GENERALSHIP


desc + The first thing you notice is the intricate web that swings quietly about
desc + his head. Made up of extremely fine and intricately made Mithril
desc + chains that go from ear to nose, nose to lip, tooth to ear,
desc + tooth to eyebrow, in all sorts of combinations attached to small
desc + iron loop piercings all over his face. Each chain seems to be carefully
desc + fitted with a tiny leather sleeve where it crosses another chain, so
desc + as to make this constantly shifting, glittering, mesh of metal eerily silent.
desc + Other than his face, the rest of his body is rather unremarkable, accept
desc + maybe for the fact that he is no longer a young felar by any stretch, and
desc + his red-brown fur seems to be covered by a disproportionate number
desc + of scars and burn marks. He is fit, as any fighter might be, he is quiet
desc + and has sharp claws, as many other of felar race...in fact, he looks
desc + pretty much like any other felar you have ever seen...apart from the
desc + chain mesh over his face.




Description after 300 hours.

desc + The first thing you notice is his scarred, mangled, and almost furless face.
desc + On his upper and lower lips, all along both nostrils, along his eyebrows and
desc + ears are tatters of skin...as if a hundred tiny piercings have been ripped
desc + out of his face with a single swift stroke, turning what you can tell used to
desc + be a fairly handsome felar face into a tattered mess.
desc +
desc + Other than his face, the rest of his body is rather unremarkable, accept
desc + maybe in how he seems to hold himself in a way that favors his right leg. No
desc + longer a young felar by any stretch of the imagination, his fur seems to be
desc + covered by a disproportionate number of scars and burn marks...as well as a
desc + grey that instead of being in patches is evenly spread out through his
desc + natural red-brown that gives him the grizzled look that combined with his
desc + face and scars give him the look of a campaigner long used to the trail and
desc + intense combat.