Jormyr | Sat 31-Oct-15 03:30 AM |
Member since 31st Dec 2014
419 posts
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#4486, "RE: Well both of these are in help description iirc"
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There's definitely things that can be done to mitigate some of the ones that aren't feasible. As an example, I typically just say "A large frost giant is here", or "You see a frost giant here." You're definitely there, without specifying position.
However, for the sake of people's writing sanity, it's probably not too likely the description police are going to come down on you because you said you're standing when you're knocked unconscious, or were overly specific about wearing platemail for the warrior, when in fact you just got PK'd and are in outfit gear.
There's a lot of little situations that could be brought up or tweaked, so it's hard to really detail all of them. However, I should mention that if someone honestly wants improvement or help with a description, I've actually come to enjoy working with people. Given the difficulty of my hours, I probably wouldn't advise praying for me for help, but I'm going to tentatively say if a player wanted help, they're welcome to write me a note and I'll try to track them down to work on improving a description, if they wanted.
(This will totally be a trial basis, and I'd like to remind people I play WEIRD hours. If I don't drop in, it's quite likely I just haven't met up. If it goes poorly, I totally reserve the right to cancel this offer at any time!)
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Jormyr's Description Help
[View all] , Jormyr, Mon 26-Oct-15 07:26 PM
Please sticky,
Kstatida,
03-Oct-16 03:31 AM, #12
Look in the eyes - easy and informational,
Kstatida,
29-Oct-15 10:40 AM, #3
RE: Look in the eyes - easy and informational,
Isildur,
29-Oct-15 03:38 PM, #4
Oh there's always a measure of abstraction,
Kstatida,
30-Oct-15 06:38 AM, #5
RE: Oh there's always a measure of abstraction,
Isildur,
30-Oct-15 10:06 AM, #6
Well both of these are in help description iirc,
Kstatida,
30-Oct-15 11:37 AM, #7
RE: Well both of these are in help description iirc,
Jormyr,
31-Oct-15 03:30 AM #8
I'd like an option to have different descriptions,
incognito,
31-Oct-15 03:51 AM, #9
Buahahaha,
Doof,
01-Nov-15 12:41 PM, #10
I generally use "Your gaze falls upon",
Theerkla,
02-Nov-15 06:23 AM, #11
Could you add,
lurker,
27-Oct-15 06:58 PM, #2
What's your favorite description you've ever read?,
Homard,
26-Oct-15 07:33 PM, #1
Jesus Mary and Joseph,
crsweeney,
03-Oct-16 02:52 PM, #13
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