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Are you looking for an immersive, medieval fantasy multiplayer roleplaying game? How about one with that perfect blend of adrenaline-pumping, finger-trembling PlayerKilling and mind-bending, awe-inspiring RolePlaying? You’re standing at the gates of The Carrion Fields.

By what name do you wish to be mourned?

Developed, maintained, and played by avid gamers and roleplayers since 1994, the Carrion Fields has evolved into a virtual world unlike any other. From the heart-pounding chase of the deathfull PlayerKill to the palm-sweatying anticipation of the deepest Exploration - as long as you enjoy in-depth, interactive RolePlaying with players worldwide, there’s a place for you here.

And, it’s completely free.

Roll up a new character and choose one of sixteen completely different, tightly balanced adventure classes. Pick your race from seventeen options – some standard fantasy fare, and some very unique to our world. With the morality, ethos, religion, and cabal choices available, you’ll have almost infinite replayability, with a new gaming experience every time.

You need not worry about stagnation – most characters will die permanently when they have sustained too many deaths to mobs and other players (around 250 hours is typical). Though, if you’re crafty or hearty enough to survive the brutal warfare of Carrion Fields, your character will eventually die of old age (650-900 hours, depending on race). Thanks to the turnover of permanent death, you’ll find players of all skill levels playing characters throughout the 51 level progression to Hero.

Follow one of a dozen active religions and strive for the mark of an immortal. Explore hundreds of areas, all of which are unique to Carrion Fields. Join one of eight cabals – for protection, or to further conflict. Make friends. Make enemies. Then make your friends make your enemies dead. The possibilities are only as limited as your imagination.

New players are always welcome at Carrion Fields. The vast majority of our playerbase is mature, highly competitive – and dedicated to making Carrion Fields an enjoyable experience. Our immortal staff has more than 30 members, all of whom are volunteers, donating their time and talents to making Carrion Fields a fun and unique experience for all of our players. We have an average of about 45 players on at any given time, with strict rules against multi-charring and botting – every player you find online is active.

So connect to the Carrion Fields and get started today. Feed your inner Killer, Achiever, Socialite, or Explorer at the Carrion Fields, and the voices will stop. We promise.

Still not convinced? See what some of our current players have to say about the game, in their own words!