This may shock you, but when Immortals play the game as mortals, sometimes our roles fall flat on the person reading them, too.

(Although I have to say, if I'm reading this thread right and Enlilth didn't think your role was funny, there probably isn't any help for it. A more likely situation for a comic role is that Enlilth will think it's hilarious, but no one else, including your would-be patron Imm, will.)