I did take everyones changes to heart. I am stubborn, up to a point, but I do know I am not the most knowing. But at a certain point, the area is no longer mine. This isn't the issue, though, as I would have infinite patience had it just been an area to deal with.

Secondly, in terms of true grammar issues, I did change them. All of them. If a sentence was worded awkardly, that was different, but in terms of the english language I tried my very best not to butcher it. I know my grammar isn't immaculate, but I am sure its passable.

Lastly, I, myself, never said it was done for final review. I was told repeatedly and often by several folks that they were willing to pass it on. These same folks(not to mean any disrespect) were the same ones that said my area was good or great or at the very least just fine. Once the last area walkthrough was started though, I got a very blatant...this area is crap vibe. Perhaps it was. I do not know what makes a good area. But no matter how you cut it, 700 hours is working. I put more effort in imming then I have in all 12 years of my public education(and what I have completed in my college work), including any academic events I participated in.

I did not want to make this a public argument, and in the future if you wish to disagree with me, please send it in a polite e-mail, or let it go.

Do not believe for a moment that the area walkthrough was the main issue, because it is not, and I do ask of you to not make it more of an issue, or pretend that is why I left. Otherwise you will be lying to others and yourself.

-Alenysi