So Today, I got IMM Exp for my role. I've consistently gottan 1000+ for roles that I spent any kind of time writing. This one, I thought was at least decent. Then up an whacked with 500 EXP for it. So I ask for some feedback as to where I went wrong... Figuring if I could get the feedback, I could improve in subsequent chapters and/or characters. Now, I've been on the fence on this guy as it is, because of the total lack of understanding I have for the class, but this just kind of topped it. I understand that everyone has bad days..... And for what it's worth, this is totally not the typical experience I've had with the Imm's of this place, this is really the first time I've really felt insulted....

And here is the feeback I get:


You feel a slight increase in experience as the gods acknowledge your existence of a role in Thera.
You have learned 1% of your detect invis ability.
You receive 500 experience points.

<wilderness - waxing - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 78%m 100%mv - 5917tnl - 7 PM> pray Can I have a bit of feedback?
You pray to the heavens for help!

<wilderness - waxing - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 100%m 100%mv - 5917tnl - 8 PM> pray Was it just too much?
You pray to the heavens for help!

<wilderness - waxing - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 100%m 100%mv - 5917tnl - 9 PM>
An Immortal tells you 'what the hell are you talking about?'

**** Wow, what the heck man.... this is a bit much for just asking for
**** feedback on a role....

<wilderness - waxing - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 100%m 100%mv - 5917tnl - 9 PM>

Autosaving.

<wilderness - waxing - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 100%m 100%mv - 5917tnl - 10 PM> pray My role. I guess I'm used to getting a bit better Exp for my roles....
You pray to the heavens for help!

<wilderness - waxing - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 100%m 100%mv - 5917tnl - 10 PM> reply Just want to know where this one fell short. I thought it was on par with others that I've done.
You tell an Immortal 'Just want to know where this one fell short. I thought it was on par with others that I've done.'

<wilderness - waxing - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 100%m 100%mv - 5917tnl - 11 PM>
An Immortal tells you 'Probably the reviewer if I were guessing.'

<wilderness - waxing - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 100%m 100%mv - 5917tnl - 11 PM> reply I guess so... Three chapters worth of it for only 500exp seems a bit light in my experience with other ones, was just wondering if I could have some feedback.
You tell an Immortal 'I guess so... Three chapters worth of it for only 500exp seems a bit light in my experience with other ones, was just wondering if I could have some feedback.'

<wilderness - waxing - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 100%m 100%mv - 5917tnl - 1 AM>
The rain ceases.

<wilderness - waxing - cloudy - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 100%m 100%mv - 5917tnl - 2 AM>
An Immortal tells you 'Ah... general lack of character info.'

<wilderness - waxing - cloudy - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 100%m 100%mv - 5917tnl - 2 AM> reply I'm not bucking for more, if it really was only worth 500, I just want to know how to make it better next time.
You tell an Immortal 'I'm not bucking for more, if it really was only worth 500, I just want to know how to make it better next time.'

**** Snip Some skill spamming before I Decide that this char is toast.

<PROTECTED - full - cloudy - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 76%m 81%mv - 5872tnl - 5 AM> pray Thanks guys for reading such a long role, but if I'm getting off on that bad a start, I think I'll try something else.
You pray to the heavens for help!

<PROTECTED - full - cloudy - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 76%m 81%mv - 5872tnl - 5 AM>
The sun rises above the horizon.

<PROTECTED - full - cloudy - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 81%m 87%mv - 5872tnl - 6 AM>
The cathedral bells chime six times before sounding a resplendent carillon.

<PROTECTED - full - cloudy - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 81%m 87%mv - 5872tnl - 6 AM>
It starts to rain.

Autosaving.

<PROTECTED - full - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 87%m 93%mv - 5872tnl - 7 AM>
A commoner leaves west.

<PROTECTED - full - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 87%m 93%mv - 5872tnl - 7 AM> delete
Type delete again to confirm this command.
WARNING: this command is irreversible.
Typing delete with an argument will undo delete status.
If you confirm the delete, this name will be unusable for 30 days.

Time to throw away 11 hours, 21 levels and 94400 experience.

Death tells you 'I AM DEATH, NOT TAXES. I TURN UP ONLY ONCE.'
An Immortal tells you 'Be sure to wipe your weeping vag I guess?'

**** Wow, So instead of giving the constructive criticism, we're just gonna move straight to insulting people.

<PROTECTED - full - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 93%m 99%mv - 5872tnl - 8 AM> reply Wow, what a way to want to keep players.
You tell an Immortal 'Wow, what a way to want to keep players.'

<PROTECTED - full - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 93%m 99%mv - 5872tnl - 8 AM> delete
Patience, you will be able to delete shortly.

<PROTECTED - full - raining - sober - outdoor>
<100%hp 93%m 99%mv - 5872tnl - 8 AM> delete
Awaiting the hour of reprisal, your time slips away...