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CyradiaFri 08-Jul-11 06:31 AM
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#100839, "RE: (DELETED) [OUTLANDER] Brock the Sentinel of Summertide"


          

I kept running into this character on the fringe of other stuff I was watching, and I thought it was a pretty good char and generally underappreciated.

My piece of unsolicited advice is to write a role. I kept seeing what I suspect were very cool pieces of RP about you not wearing equipment you didn't trade for or kill for yourself. It appeared you had an interesting (and tough!) set of rules for yourself, and you very well might have gotten more imm love if we'd fully understood/appreciated what you were doing.

More often than not I see really cool role ideas that aren't executed IC. This time I was seeing execution and not really sure what I was looking at. Nothing huge - just a paragraph explaining the general idea and possible IC reason would have helped.

  

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Topic(DELETED) [OUTLANDER] Brock the Sentinel of Summertide [View all] , Death_Angel, Tue 05-Jul-11 07:36 PM
Reply RE: (DELETED) [OUTLANDER] Brock the Sentinel of Summert..., Cyradia, 08-Jul-11 06:31 AM #2
Reply Well that's no fun., Urushugol (Anonymous), 06-Jul-11 02:13 AM, #1
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