What do you, the IMMstaff, look for in a role?

I wrote one at about level 40(took me some time to proof-read it and re-write) and while I don't think it's 'awesome' per say, I'm rather proud of it. But I'm not sure it's what you (IMMs) are looking for.

To paraphrase it (and, if I got lucky enough for any of you to read it, you'll probably know who I'm playing :)) I wrote about what shaped (or in the case of the first chapter of the role, what began to shape) my character. His childhood. I plan on subsequent entries to express how he came to feel about the races of Thera and the language, as well as racial/alignment conflicts. I plan on entering these before level 51 (if I ever make it...). All of these entries take place before I leave for the Academy, AKA level 1.

Thanks in advance, this game is the best MUD I've played so far.