>>What were you talking about? I think I used the correct
>room
>>for all of my nightgaunts.
>
>You sent some off from a room nightgaunts won't return someone
>to.
>
>>Next, what have you got against my rp? How can it be
>>improved?
>
>Most of your 'IC' conversations are indistinguishable from a
>conversation on IRC or QHCF.
>
>Edited to add a few quotes:
>
>'You lucky son of a bithc.'
>
>'I'd love to nail gzur'
>
>'A goddamn nexun conjurer gaunted me.'
>
>'where's your aura wand?'
>
>'have my ####'
>


Nep did a favor for me and listed some of the things which my character said, which he didn't feel were RP. My question is this: How could I of said these things better?

Suggestions are welcome.