>>>What were you talking about? I think I used the correct
>>room
>>>for all of my nightgaunts.
>>

"Rooms"... Well, if you're in the open plains area, there sure ain't any rooms for example. Or in the shadow groove. I would perhaps have said. "I think I the appropriate area to summon my nightgaunts."

>>You sent some off from a room nightgaunts won't return
>someone
>>to.
>>

"Room" again... The same idea here... There aren't THAT many "rooms" in CF, sure we call them rooms, but your char is perhaps in the shadow grove, the aryth ocean and whatnot. And as I said, no rooms there. ^^

>>>Next, what have you got against my rp? How can it be
>>>improved?
>>
>>Most of your 'IC' conversations are indistinguishable from a
>>conversation on IRC or QHCF.
>>
>>Edited to add a few quotes:
>>
>>'You lucky son of a bithc.'
>>
>>'I'd love to nail gzur'
>>
>>'A goddamn nexun conjurer gaunted me.'
>>

"Gaunted"... Perhaps say "A goddamn nexun conjurer sent a nightgaunt after me!"

>>'where's your aura wand?'
>>
>>'have my ####'
>>
>
>

Not sure in what context this is... But it's... It's not totally out of the window, but sure ain't good.
Perhaps: "Where did you find your sleek amber rod?" and "Do you have my armors?" (Or if you're a duergar and love profanitys: "Do you have my ####?".

Hope that helps a bit... Just try to think about WHERE you are and what your CHAR thinks/feels etc. Don't mix your on view of Thera into how your char sees it.