It's official, it's done. Placement as follows:

1st: Nolse.

2nd: Pzuryxal.


I opted not to go further in awarding prizes, to give those people who
ntered the option of trying again next month. There were some good
ones out there!

Prizes have been awarded. I'll have statistics and assorted comments
coming soon.

Thanks to everyone who participated.

Hehehe, but I doubt I'll be wining something.

Keep these cool rolecontests going! Just LOVE to read the comments, and then later read the roles on PBFs. :D

(Some people really should start writing novels or something!)

CONTESTANTS
Angale: Well written start to the role, but feels like it's lacking
in oomph.

Azamalfum: I thought there was a lot lacking here, like the basic
how/why of who you are, your sphere, etc.

Baldringloch: It's a good first-person perspective of beliefs, but
how did you get there?

Booorstone: Good start, but the additional chapters seem repetitive.

Borkahd: Kind of bland and unoriginal, but decently written.

Canir: Wish there were more paragraphs - block role chapters can
be hard to read. Also was a little bit confused by what exactly is
going on in that first chapter, which makes subsequent chapters
unclear.

Druc: The first chapter was pretty standard. The two following
chapters were far more enjoyable, and humorous!

Drue: Good start, but wish there was more. Paints a nice picture.
Would also like to know more about the early days of life.

Farkash: First chapter made me laugh, which it went into more detail
though. Needs fleshing out!

Fealthia: Pretty basic. Covers the usual role basis, but needs more
fleshing out. Wouldn't mind seeing an update too.

Firhindil: Definitely covers all the necessary points, just isn't a
very inspiring read.

Grai: I liked the interaction, the imagery, etc. Can't wait to see
how it plays out.

Grunta: Enjoyed the scenes played out, and the story behind the
character. Will be interesting to see how the character progresses.

Gryssil: The beginning chapters never really captured my imagination,
though I liked the later "lessons". Would like to see more.

Haidoril: Liked the imagery in the initial chapter. Enjoyed seeing
how the character was evolving/growing in the subsequent chapters.

Hask: Good images and storyline, but parts seemed a little disjointed
as far as how you got from there to where you are now.

Hayim: While I liked the updating on current events, I felt like the
role in general lacked that extra something to make it special.

Iebalen: I liked the premise of the story, but the reading started to
feel a little tedious towards the end. I'd really recommend splitting
up some of those larger paragraphs to make it an easier read, also.

Iegob: I really liked how the updates always tied back to the original
portion of the role. I definitely was able to get a feel for what this
character was all about.

Ikda: Pretty basic role, it just didn't have a lot of fleshing out.
I wasn't feeling much of anything about the character by the end.

Illian: I liked the story generally, though the formatting made it a
little hard to follow. I wish there were more updates as far as how
you got to where you're at now, etc.

Jern: Initial chapter is very descriptive of the why/how behind the
character. I wish the following chapters explained more on the "why"
of the progression vs. just the "what".

Kobicar: Definite effort put into this role, but man was it a tough
read. Lots of extraneous words that made it more tedious than
necessary. Updates would also be good.

Korin: A nice first-person account of how you got to where you are.
The updates were similar, but I still felt like I could've used more
info somewhere along the line.

Larkvenn: Good start, liked the subsequent updates. Look forward to
more!

Luggbok: Not the most original role I've read, but it did have
updates as far as where the character is at and that's good!

Minvak: Good start, would like to see more next time.

Mreash: Fairly simple, I liked how you left the role open for
evolution of the character.

Nidblot: A good start. Wish it went into more detail on how you
ended up where you're at right now, including class, cabal, etc.

Nolse: I really liked this role overall, and hope subsequent updates
are as interesting!

Odraylinder: I sort of felt lost in the beginning. I liked how the
important beliefs were integrated into the storyline though. Also,
last chapter felt rushed somehow.

Pezophaps: Cute little story. Would like more updating now that the
character is out in the world.

Proleteria: I laughed, I cried. Not really, but I liked the various
ups and downs the character has and continues to go through.
Can't wait to see what'll come next.

Pzuryxal: Very well written, and slightly disturbing. Keep up the
good work.

Quigiliiz: The beginning felt rushed - it didn't explain a lot about
the character to me.

Quixhint: Well written, kept me entertained. A nice "twist" compared
to the usual cabal role. Seemed to have a Harry Potter-esque feel to
it.

Szaervedt: An okay start, though I wish there was more of a how/why
we're on this path. Maybe in future updates?

Thomayen: Wasn't lacking anything per se, just didn't capture my
imagination either. Could also use more updates!

Valdora: While this definitely covered all the points a role should,
it just didn't capture my imagination. Better luck next month!

Woldrun: Short, to the point initial chapter. What's next?

Did you get my role? Or did I screw up the sending in some fashion? Thanks. Just noticed I didnt get a comment at all.

I don't see a note from you. There's always next month. :)

ALIGN
G: 11
N: 14
E: 15
T: 40

ETHOS
O: 8
N: 7
C: 25
T: 40

CABAL
BATTLE: 11
TRIBUNAL: 2
EMPIRE: 2
FORTRESS: 3
SCION: 2
OUTLANDER: 4
NEXUS: 1
NONE: 15
TOTAL: 40

CLASS:
WAR: 21
CON: 1
SHF: 1
TRA: 1
SHA: 2
THI: 2
RAN: 3
INV: 2
BAR: 2
ASN: 3
A-P: 1
PAL: 1
TOT: 40

SPHERES:
Earth () Air (1) Fire (2) Water ()
Spirit () Para-elements () Storms (2) Seasons ()
Death () Fertility () Magic (4) Reason ()
Truth () Vivimancy () Revelation () Music ()
Healing () Protection (1) Creation () Mercy ()
Strength (5) Poetry (1) Deception () Necromancy ()
Concealment () Courage (2) Victory (2) Destruction (2)
Rage (1) Combat (3) Order () Peace ()
Chaos (2) War () Balance () Fate ()
Honor () Dedication (2) Wisdom () Knowledge ()
Purity () Greed (1) Justice () Judgment (1)
Love () Vanity (1) Beauty (1) Passion ()
Anger () Covetousness () Envy (3) Gluttony ()
Lust (1) Pride (2) Sloth () Honesty ()