Isildur | Fri 30-Oct-09 11:29 AM |
Member since 04th Mar 2003
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#2597, "RE: October role contest winners!"
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This is from Derogker's comments:
"Good, well-written role that describes the character's motivations without going nine generations into the past to do so... The rest of the role was ok, but felt like a forced extrapolation of a few key moments in the character's life."
I'm not playing Derogker, but this pretty much sums up my problems with roles.
I can write a good "intro" role that adequately explains why the character is:
1. An adventurer in the first place, 2. Of a particular alignment, 3. Of a particular ethos, 4. Of a particular class, 5. and why he/she has any particular quirks, likes, dislikes, etc.
Beyond that, though, I'm kind of at a loss for what to "add". Typically I'll add something about how I felt upon getting empowered, inducted to a cabal, etc. But, otherwise, my characters' lives are often times somewhat "static". Log on, take back cabal item if necessary, take other cabal items if possible, talk to applicants if I'm a leader, then run around trying to PK people.
What's the secret to writing Fjarn-role-contest-winning roles beyond simply having a good intro?
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October role contest winners!
[View all] , Fjarn, Thu 22-Oct-09 09:19 PM
Out of curiosity, why arnt all the RC rewards given out...,
CD (Guest),
16-Nov-09 12:03 AM, #12
RE: Out of curiosity, why arnt all the RC rewards given...,
Fjarn,
16-Nov-09 10:19 PM, #13
RE: October role contest winners!,
Fjarn,
23-Oct-09 07:56 PM, #1
Thanks for everything and especially the feedback,
Nerys (Guest),
24-Oct-09 06:14 AM, #2
RE: Thanks for everything and especially the feedback,
Fjarn,
25-Oct-09 04:31 PM, #5
So, I'm assuming I was runner up to the runner ups? Th...,
Stevers (Guest),
25-Oct-09 10:18 AM, #3
RE: October role contest winners!,
Maldaris (Guest),
25-Oct-09 10:18 AM, #4
RE: October role contest winners!,
Isildur,
31-Oct-09 12:41 PM #6
I'm thinkin like this...,
Arrna (Guest),
01-Nov-09 01:22 AM, #7
RE: I'm thinkin like this...,
Isildur,
02-Nov-09 04:19 PM, #9
RE: October role contest winners!,
Kalisda (Guest),
01-Nov-09 01:22 AM, #8
RE: October role contest winners!,
Fjarn,
02-Nov-09 04:19 PM, #10
RE: October role contest winners!,
Derogker (Guest),
14-Nov-09 03:57 PM, #11
RE: October role contest winners!,
Fjarn,
16-Nov-09 10:19 PM, #14
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