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IsildurFri 30-Oct-09 11:29 AM
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#2597, "RE: October role contest winners!"


          

This is from Derogker's comments:

"Good, well-written role that describes the character's motivations
without going nine generations into the past to do so... The rest of
the role was ok, but felt like a forced extrapolation of a few key
moments in the character's life."

I'm not playing Derogker, but this pretty much sums up my problems with roles.

I can write a good "intro" role that adequately explains why the character is:

1. An adventurer in the first place,
2. Of a particular alignment,
3. Of a particular ethos,
4. Of a particular class,
5. and why he/she has any particular quirks, likes, dislikes, etc.

Beyond that, though, I'm kind of at a loss for what to "add". Typically I'll add something about how I felt upon getting empowered, inducted to a cabal, etc. But, otherwise, my characters' lives are often times somewhat "static". Log on, take back cabal item if necessary, take other cabal items if possible, talk to applicants if I'm a leader, then run around trying to PK people.

What's the secret to writing Fjarn-role-contest-winning roles beyond simply having a good intro?

  

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HOT TopicOctober role contest winners! [View all] , Fjarn, Thu 22-Oct-09 09:19 PM
Reply Out of curiosity, why arnt all the RC rewards given out..., CD (Guest), 16-Nov-09 12:03 AM, #12
Reply RE: Out of curiosity, why arnt all the RC rewards given..., Fjarn, 16-Nov-09 10:19 PM, #13
Reply RE: October role contest winners!, Fjarn, 23-Oct-09 07:56 PM, #1
     Reply Thanks for everything and especially the feedback, Nerys (Guest), 24-Oct-09 06:14 AM, #2
     Reply RE: Thanks for everything and especially the feedback, Fjarn, 25-Oct-09 04:31 PM, #5
     Reply So, I'm assuming I was runner up to the runner ups? Th..., Stevers (Guest), 25-Oct-09 10:18 AM, #3
     Reply RE: October role contest winners!, Maldaris (Guest), 25-Oct-09 10:18 AM, #4
     Reply RE: October role contest winners!, Isildur, 31-Oct-09 12:41 PM #6
          Reply I'm thinkin like this..., Arrna (Guest), 01-Nov-09 01:22 AM, #7
          Reply RE: I'm thinkin like this..., Isildur, 02-Nov-09 04:19 PM, #9
          Reply RE: October role contest winners!, Kalisda (Guest), 01-Nov-09 01:22 AM, #8
          Reply RE: October role contest winners!, Fjarn, 02-Nov-09 04:19 PM, #10
               Reply RE: October role contest winners!, Derogker (Guest), 14-Nov-09 03:57 PM, #11
                    Reply RE: October role contest winners!, Fjarn, 16-Nov-09 10:19 PM, #14
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