Entries Total 45In alphabetical order:Agar - (60) While this role isn't a great display of the english language,the author does get his point clearly across. The unique (if notunbelieveable) story is very detailed explaining the character's entirelife from spec choice to cabal, well done.Agraet - (65) The author lays out a nice story explaining fire giant societyand his character's background in this society. While this is a well writtenrole, after reading it I'm left to wonder what the character is going to donow.Breln - (90) This role shows and excellent use of role updates. The entirepiece is well written, and each chapter flows together nicely without beingtoo wordy. The role highlights all the right points from class choice tolittle character quirks that really kick up roleplaying. Very well done.Bruntaur - (75) While both chapters were on the long side, they were bothwell written. The author clearly explains his path in life, and how hisrole connects to his religion choice. Well done.Chiami - (70) The author presents a nice little story about his upbringing.While I enjoyed the take on chaos and war, after reading the most recententry, I'm left feeling a little empty. It seemed like there were a lotof explanations of the character's recent life, but not a lot of theirself realizations.Dhaath - (73) The author presents a long but enjoyable story that givesgreat insight into minotaur society. Extra points given for includingvarious areas in Thera.Dughaid - (30) While the author puts out some acceptable entries, theinjection of various OOC ramblings really ruins the total package.Eostri - (60) This role highlights all the right points, but it justdoesn't stand out to me as a winner.Faistir - (70) The author paints a nice story about his gruesome upbringingin several chapters that flow nicely together. While everything is welldone, I'm still left with an emptiness, and wondering where the character isgoing to go next. There's no mention of a cabal or lack of cabal, and forsuch a well planned out character, I think there should have been.Feadyha - Disqualified - role entry entered after time of note.Gruffil - (90) I had to look up the theme song so I could sing along withyour lyrics in the first chapter. It's always nice to have a little humorput into a role when you're reading through so many, and that's what reallymakes this one stand out. If you ever feel like coming over to the stormyside, I'm in need of some sea shanties. The rest of the role was also ofgood quality, and gives some nice insight into the character. Very welldone.Jeod - (70) A nicely written role that gives a lot of insight into thepersonality of the character. That being said, bringing terror seems likean empty goal, and I'm left wanting something more from this role.Jesoeh - (60) The author presents a nice story that gives a nice take onthe character's fall from magic. This seemed like a nice start to me,rather than a complete tale.Kaihan - (65) The role was light, and easy to read and keep reading. It'sa very nice start, but at the end of it I'm still left with several basicquestions about the character. With maybe even just one more chapter, thisrole would feel complete.Khazvhak - (85) The author cleanly points out all the right things thatshould be in a role. After reading it I understand all of the ambitions ofthe character, and that's not something a lot of people can easily portray.While it is well written, it just doesn't have that flash for me to make ita first place winner. Still, very well done.Kreo - (70) While this role shows several nice updates that all build uponeach other, the initial character makeup seems lacking. After reading it,I'm not seeing any of those fun little quirks that really make roleplayingpop. That being said, it's a good standard role for class and sphere choice.Illyria - (80) Cleanly written and easy to read, I enjoyed looking over thisrole even with all the darkness in it. The important points of the characterare presented nicely, but I'm still left with a few questions.Iltanthal - (75) This was a nice light read, that kept me reading on. Its aninteresting background, and I enjoyed how the character evolved to getthrough certain emotional issues. Still, the entire role speaks so muchabout one race, and how the character's sphere choice interacts with that onerace. It would be nice to see the character developed just a little morefrom so much focus on one thing. Overall, well done.Izuhral - (70) This is a great start to a role, it really shows some uniquecharacter quirks that could potentially foster some spectacular role play.That being said, I'm left with many questions as to where this character isgoing. It's definitely something the author should build upon, and I'd lookforward to some more easy reading.Laraiyin - (50) Something that can really ruin reading a role for me, is apointless role entry. In the case of this total role, there's more than one.I assume you were trying to convey your knowledge of the various races andclasses in Thera, but it came across as more of mini help files in your role.Now if you had taken this a step further, and discussed how your characterfeels about the subjects then it would have enhanced the entire read.Lerzion - (85) After reading all the other roles, this one definitely has adifferent take on life in general. I haven't personally been able to watchyou much, but this role really gives a lot of opportunity to make yourcharacter shine. Having some humor injected into it didn't hurt either.Lorzs - (65) The role sets up most everything for the character, but theunbelievable timeline irked me somewhat. Yes, giants live a long time,but a giant still alive from the time of Arbs is just a bit much. Otherthan that it's a nice role. I'd like to see if the character has foundanyone in his current state to attach himself too.Magrath - (60) There were so many proper nouns in this role, I had troublekeeping up with all of the characters and places introduced so quickly.While it's an acceptable role, I'm still left with several questions aboutthe character.Maltriane - (70) I particularly enjoyed why the child choices to follow hisGod. This is a very interesting start to a role, and I'd expect to see somenice roleplaying out of this character. That being said, I'm still leftwith several questions, so not a winner this time.Maelann - (85) This is a very vivid and well written role, making for quicklight reading. While the colorfulness of the role cannot be ignored, afterreading it I'm still left with questions about the character. Well done,but simply not a first place role right now.Minvil - (85) The author covers all of the needed point, and clearlyexplains his character's custom religion. I happen to enjoy roles thatincorporate things and places already in CF. Not that other roles are bad,simply it shows the player has taken time to enjoy a certain area or areas.Well done.Myn - (65) The role is fine and it displays a nice little tale of how thecharacter got from A to B, but it just doesn't stand out to me. Also, therole updates just sound too similar to the initial role, it would be nice toread something new that's exciting and might change the character. Ratherthat recapping the same stuff. Nice effort, not a winner this time.Naukhtun - (90) This is a very interesting role with some unique twists.It made for quick light reading, which I happen to like. With a role likethis there should defiantly be high expectations for the character. Welldone. Disqualified due to rage delete.Neleai - (70) This role fits the standard for cabal choice, sphere etc.I like that the entire philosophy of the character is cleanly laid out, myonly complaint would be using an "accent" in all the chapters with theexception of the first. I don't really see the need for accents in roles orwriting for that matter, unless you're doing dialog.Nellius - (50) While this is an acceptable role, I personally like to see alittle more depth than just I'm going to kill everyone. From reading it, Iassume the character is going to have a lot of little quirks that canreally make the roleplay stand out (at least I hope so, rather than blandkill everyone).Padwei - (95) I got to the finally chapter, and was so disappointed thatI couldn't read the rest (yet). It's a nice light story, and very well puttogether. Excellent job.Purrtis - (65) The role covers all the right points, but the actual storydoesn't stand out among the other entries. Well done just the same.Relm - (60) This is a nice start to a role that gives the character somepretty big shoes to fill. After reading it, I'm still left with somequestions about the character's makeup and future goals. Nice joboverall.Rheddac - (70) A very nice start to a role, and it also points out somethings learned from exploration. While it's easy to assume thecharacters next steps, it still seems like there's some quality updateswaiting to be entered. Not a winner in this contest, but well done justthe same.Ryldagh - (70) This is a well written and concise role, which is always nicewhen a reader is looking at over forty of them. That being said, it'sbasicness leaves it a bit lost in the crowd among the other entries. Welldone just the same.Seliona - (75) While the character map is displayed nicely in the role, it'sa little on the bland side for my tastes. It's definitely an acceptablerole deserving of the points it's received, but not a contest winner.Shaikar - (75) The author gives a nice unique tale that's easy to read, butonce again I'm left with several questions about the character. Thischaracter is still pretty fresh, so perhaps with some more insight thisrole could stand out from the rest.Sharricci - (80) This was a nice light read with some humor thrown in forgood measure. While the author explains lots of little details aboutthe character, it seems like it's about time she the character had somerevelations about herself rather than a continuous theme of confusion.Taasarin - (50) While this is a neat concept, it really doesn't tell me awhole lot about where the character is going (or since the role chaptersare a little late in "life" - has gone?).Tlingit - (50) A perfectly acceptable role for the character's position andgoals, yet it's a little on the bland side compared to the other entries.Based on the character quirks mentioned, this seems like the character wouldbe fun to watch even if the role wasn't exciting to read.Tonilt - (50) A short, but perfectly acceptable role that highlights a lotof the right points. Another one that simply pales in comparison to someother entries.Tulkaul - (70) This is an interesting take on fire giant society. This roleis easy to read, but after reading both entries it seems like a lot of themessages are repeated needlessly. Overall it's still a nice role, but lackof future ambitions for the character make it not a winner.Volubryotr - (60) An acceptable role given the character's class and racechoice, but it still fits into the level of average. It's definitelydeserving of the points already awarded to it, but not a winner here.Xia - (65) The author write a nice twisted tail, and this role seems likeit would be fun to play. That being said, after reading it, I'm left toquestions the character's ambitions.Xullahni - (80) The author sets up a nice line of entries that cleanlyexplain the character map. The background entry didn't really pop outto me. The last two entries were not scored as they were entered passedthe deadline.
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