That you actually didn't just smash down on Khurgas role. Reread it now... I must have written it weee early in the morning. It's kinda bleh.

Though I thought Ckaths role would be more interesting, but yeah I agree. It's to long, need to learn how to write things shorter. Shouldn't be writing novels for roles, makes them hard to play out as well.

Glad to see the comments though. Keep up the kickass work.