Semi-Finalists & Their Individual Comments:

Aeria : The background overview is really well-thought out and written

Anqaar : Very well written, nicely done with good development & revenge

Cabdru : A well written & interesting read

Candra : I really enjoyed the descriptive family history and backstory, seemed like a good story (that you should have done more with!)

Daggan : I've mixed feelings on this role, it’s a really interesting read, but not particularly well written--but still very interesting

Ghimvhall : I think you have an excellent start, and should continue to carry forward.

Greddarh : Insertion of poems and other creatie works always a plus. Story is very interesting, though not the easiest to read flow/style

Grunlath : A real page turner, this was pretty good role stuff, and your perspective is fun to "hear" from.

Kahltu : A great example of character building, background and current storylines

Kevmorn : I like the updates, pivotal moments and other stuff, its got style

Silvellien : It’s a interesting role, and I do want to watch you in action some

Thestune : This role has a lot going for it, has a very well written background story, and well thought descriptions

Ulthinius : It’s a good role, very long, and sometimes poorly worded, but great detail