This character also explained all the right things, I simply left it out of the comments. Remember it's a contest, so something has to make a role shine other than explaining all the right things (and after reading and writing so many roles it's still a hard job to clearly explain all the right things). In this case, it was a nice light story that used updates to move the character along very well. There was so much momentum in moving the character along, I really wanted to read the next chapters. All of that made this one my top pick. Don't read too deeply into a small blurb of a comment. If you had entered and didn't win, you're more than welcome to e-mail me for more information.

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