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Topic subjectSemi-Finalists/Finalists Comments
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342, Semi-Finalists/Finalists Comments
Posted by Dalteric on Wed 31-Dec-69 07:00 PM
Meagara: Nice progression over time in role, very interesting and fun to read--I wish I could see some of the conversations the role has eluded to.

Tranon: Very well written, with a lot of explanation! It did a good job of creating a scene, to where one almost felt like it was a movie.

Svelun: Fun role and storyline. A lot of humor interjected brings out a lot of hope and promise for the character.

Jaraffazar: Short, but not subtle. Begins as a dull humdrum, and then launches into a lot of funnies. It is really too bad that more wasn't done, might have well made top 3.

Qlallafian: Interesting, solid role. Could be expanded more.

Dukreg: Close runner up, has a solid role, well updated, and is interesting. Was only missing a slight spark to make it truly unique.

Mizzarah: Semi-finalist last time, and this time. Interesting story/role/character. Could really use some updating, however.

Morcades: Is a good start, interesting. I do like the flushed out background with a lot of consideration to how things affect things.

Kaazra: Well written & well developed, and I do like the creation of titles/terms and definitions.