1. Bold not only word but exact feature:
8 cabals
hundreds of unique areas, (to add: from bustling cities to ancient undersea ruins. you never will be the one who knows everything.)
12 active religions

2. What if we make this awesome phrase "by what name do you wish to be mourned" as exact link/button to start playing?
Like:

….The possibilities are only limited by your imagination. Dare to put it to the test? Then, by what name do you wish to be mourned...

it leads to right feeling "uh oh, I should except death and challenge right now"

And can you make some poll between other players so we know their opinions? It would be very useful...and lets try? :)