Overall, this looks good.

The text can be wider than my browser depending on how small I make it. Arguably this is something we could fix. I assume Mrs. Kasty knows how! :)

I think we may need to massage the talk of perma-death a bit more, though honestly this is already a pretty good stab and I'm not sure how to improve it. I just keep thinking about how every month or so we get a new player on newbie channel who's used to games where you play the same character for your entire tenure at a game, and decides they need to play a lich so they'll never have to die. I think we could do more there to sell why our system isn't worse than that, just different, and point out its good points... like being able to level up with veteran players, or having a chance at leadership spots because there's turnover, or the whole game not being a huge grind-fest.